A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Dear

Tairan

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,

I hope you are doing well. I am very delighted to know that you are going to join a camp for the

first

time to spend your holidays

in

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this

summer.

I believe it would be a great experience tremendously enjoyable for you. In the camp, you will be acquainted with new people and vibrant cultures, which will enhance your network.

Moreover

, you will enjoy travelling aesthetic spots with group and

berbeque

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barbeque
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at night.

Besides

, I guess

party

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at night

also

will overwhelm you.

However

, the main cons of

such

arrangement

is

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you always have to follow the instructions and rules, which is quite boring as sometimes you would love to

be go

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in your ways. Another fact should bother you which is sharing

washroom

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with others.

I already got

such

adventure

for

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three times and eagerly waiting to have another one. I would love to join

this

camping with you

this

year as I will be on

vaccasion

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vacation

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during that time. I hope if we are together, our pleasure will be doubled.

It would be appreciable if you provide me

the

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online registration link so that I can book a seat

advance

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in advance

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there.

Give my love and

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gratitude

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gratitudes

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to your parents.

Yours loving,

Nipa

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