A number of tertiary courses require students to undertake a period of unpaid work at companies or organisation as part of their programme. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this type of course requirement?

There are numerous professional

courses

which

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include an internship for free in order to graduate in the future. In my point of view, there are pros and cons

in

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this

statement.

On the one hand, unpaid

work

gives

opportunity

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to

work

for the most famous companies in any field of

work

.

For instance

,

students

can apply to

work

in Goggle, Tencent or any huge company to do

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an internship
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internship

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internships

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.

This

will help to build an awesome future career. Many

organization

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organizations

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accept young specialists and those

students

should take these chances.

However

, not all the programs require unpaid

work

but these

courses

have many advantages because

it

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will make a resume valuable and attractive. After graduating

the

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from the

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program, the new specialists can find an excellent workplace.

Nevertheless

,

enormous

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number of learners are not able to afford

working

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for free. IN order to survive, they will have to take

extra

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an extra

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part-time

job

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. Most of the

students

have to look for

a

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apply

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paid

work

because educational

courses

are expensive. If they have to labour without payment, they still need to get a

second

job.

This

is exhausting and challenging for any learner and it reduces

level

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of focus for the important volunteering

work

, which is essential for graduation.

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, an individual, who does

double

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job most likely will quit his internship in case of lack of rest or food.

Therefore

,

this

stressful lifestyle will prevent

from

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finishing a course and receiving

professional

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a professional
the professional

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certificate. There should be a solution for poor

students

,

otherwise

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these tertiary

courses

will not get enough profit for leaders.

To conclude, unpaid

work

during studying brings opportunities to join perfect organizations and become rich after graduating.

Although

, it has drawbacks because it is extremely hard to

work

for free and there is a huge risk that

students

will not achieve it and choose

quitting

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those

programme

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and

go

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for paid

work

.

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