There is no doubt that
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ajority of people spend
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huge part of their life on
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orkplace either they are satisfied or not. So,
essay will elaborate
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the number of
factors
as higher wages, environment on workplace and level of
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ob.
, will discuss how likely the expectation of
for all the employees.
and foremost factor In order to get
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is handsome salary because everyone wants luxurious lifestyle and they
get motivated when they get to know they are earning good income according to their daily requirements.
, some companies promote their employees after looking
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their performance but do not pay
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ctual wage of that designation that leads to unsatisfaction of
. To continue, some employers do not give benefits what employees deserve
as bonus,
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pay and many more.
,
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orkplace surrounding environment is
vital rather than money because sometimes employees get pressured and stressed on higher jobs with
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ood salary which result to causes various diseases like depression.
, it_s hard to meet every employee_s needs. As
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people have diverse and different requirements.
, some companies have
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olicy to do one day overtime that everyone has to pick up. Some people easily accept
policy and work long hours in order to earn more money
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, others may want to stay with their family more and be unwilling to work overtime. So, in
case
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it is hard to ask each and every employee about their needs.
,
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ompany should balance the company_s profit and its employee_s
.
In conclusion, higher pay and working surroundings are key elements that
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whether or not an individual will be satisfied with his/her role, and sometimes expectations of employees are very different hard to
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by company.
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