Atomic energy is becoming more and more popular energy source. However, some people argue that nuclear power puts life on the Earth to danger. What is your opinion?

It is true that the amount of construction of nuclear

power

is increasing so fast. It is commonly asserted that nuclear

power

is a danger

for

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to

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our planet.

i

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personally believe that there is no strong evidence to justify

this

view.

First

and most obviously, if government build atomic

energy

station,

radiation

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the radiation

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environment

may suffer.

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to say,

atomic

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the atomic

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energy

station_s surrounding area considered a dead zone, it

is prohibit

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is prohibited

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to live as far as possible.

For example

,

Atomic

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in Atomic

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energy

station_s surrounding area there is no plants, animals, population and live.

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, it may negative far-reaching consequences for

environment

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the environment

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,

Also

it

become

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becomes

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difficult to conserve valuable resources.

Additionally

,

although

nuclear

power

can produce a huge amount of

energy

, it is more likely that it damages

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the

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earth_s atmosphere. In

fact

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,fact

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if

government

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the government

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do not

built

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atomic

energy

stations

, which underlying cause of

destruction

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the destruction

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of green earth, there would be

such

issues with climate and natural habitats. It is more likely that people destroying their own planet.

Finally

, even if atomic

energy

has bad limited impacts

for

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on

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the

environment

, countries day by day aspire to open nuclear

power

stations

. unfortunately, in

a

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apply

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big countries which have a lot of these

stations

, they decreasing large areas which are suitable for

live

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.

To conclude, whilst increasing atom

energy

factories,

that is

important that decrease

number

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the number

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of atomic

energy

stations

, which harmful to the

environment

. I would argue that whilst

number

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the number

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of atomic

energy

stations

not increased yet so governments and scientists still should change their plans to preserve our valuable

plane

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planet

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