is an inevitable essence in our daily lives, whether when we are
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adult or a child. With
ubiquitous existence, it undoubtedly has great impacts on our physical development, sanity and mental state.
, the debate about competitions in human societies has been
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for decades as to state if it would be a negative or positive
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. Personally, I suggest that
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atmosphere can raise life quality, too much of it can be a disadvantage.
Since
has to compete with others in order to not be defeated or left behind,
has become
of the largest stress
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to ever be known. As
_s mind has to stay focus and concentrate on not only his goal but
observe others_
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to deduce the best strategy.
,
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will cost a bulk amount of energy and likely lead to exhaustion. In some cases, health problems may even arise.
, it can be concluded that
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affects us on a whole-body scale. Take
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, in a race where there likely will be more than a hundred participants,
will need to have a
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plan on how long a sprinting interval should
before finishing the race that can be at least five
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long and become the champion.
As far as it is
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,
can be negative in virtually no field except for health. With it being relevant,
will have a much clearer opponent to defeat and improve himself. In
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, motivation will play alongside
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. Not even we can be
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and encouraged to work harder, much experience can be gained through the weaknesses in our strategy comparing to others.
In general,
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is mostly a healthy tendency. It is not
itself that may cause the
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effects but the reasons are entirely attached to us. If
pushes himself too much, there will be damage involving his quality of life.
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