Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employers. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, technology help employee to

work

at

home

instead

of going to the

office

. Working at

home

can be beneficial for workers and employers.

This

essay will discuss why remote

work

can be beneficial for labourers and why should be encouraged. 

After covid,

people

realise that

work

at

home

has a lot of advantages;

for example

, some companies give money to their employers to build their own

office

at

home

, the funds can be used to buy a new desk, chair, computer and internet bill.

In addition

, workers choose to live in other cities where the cost of living is cheaper, therewith most

office

is located

on

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the expensive neighbourhood.

Working from

home

people

will not need transportation. Some individuals leave far from the

office

, these

people

can take one to two hours to get in your job. Remote

work

can give the opportunity to use

this

time

for personal hobbies, which can improve their productivity because their workers are having enough

time

to rest and

time

for pastime.

On other hand, that can seriously impact the economy,

people

will be working at

home

, so those

people

will decide to move to other places, because leaving close to the

office

can be expensive,

consequently

making houses and offices empty in big cities.

This

essay discussed that a remote job is helpful to save money because

people

do not need to leave close to the

office

and

also

give more free

time

,

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because these individuals will not need transportation. In my point of view,

people

should be encouraged to

work

at

home

, because

people

can

work

and travel at the same

time

and have more

time

for recreation.

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