Creative
should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music, film) in whichever
they wish. There should be no public or government
on what they do.
Creativity is a feature
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comes inherently and needs freedom for expressing itself.
, I think that not only
but all creative
should always be given freedom but with some
.
,
have natural skills which help them to convey themselves in a beautiful
, to show the deficiencies of the environment
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them. Unfortunately, in several
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their work of art restricted or banned by certain authorities.
, in some
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they were threatened by the kings, presidents, prime ministers etc.
, Azerbaijani writer Nasimi was threatened and murdered by the government nearly 500 years ago for his brave words.
, we are
and we have to be controlled because we live in communities and without
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we should be confused. If some artist paints, writes or creates something without damaging
physically and mentally there will be no
against him/her because we live in
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21st century and we have some democratic laws. But every artist has to obey the rules and laws of his/her government. They can illustrate the real face of the system which they live in but without insulting somebody_s personality.
, nowadays it is inevitable to face with films, pictures, poems which includes criticism, message etc. There are several regulatory bodies in every country which control, check these things. Undoubtedly, there some
which try to adjust their creativity but real
don_t be afraid of any
because of their thinking.
To sum up,
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of us who lives in the world
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the right to be free. We born free because god creates us in that
. Expressing ourselves in a freely
our natural right, but, unfortunately in certain autocratic
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have to keep
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because they have not any choices. Especially, in these
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it is too hard to find real
because of the restriction.
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