Dogs are the most popular pets in the world, yet many would say it is inappropriate to have them in built-up inner city areas. Do you agree or disagree ?

Human being

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The human being

have been keeping

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has been keeping

dogs as pets for ages. I

reackon

expect, believe, or suppose
reckon
reckoned

that dogs should not be kept by the people in the inner -built city areas

Firstly

, urban areas are

conjested

overfull as with blood
congested
contested

thereby dogs do not get appropriate environment.

This

is harmful for not only the

dogs but

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dogs, but

also

for masters. On the one side, the animal

get

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gets

physically weaker due to lack of physical activities in

conjested place

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the congested place
congested place

. It has been found that majority of dogs who are

temped

press down tightly
tamped

in the cities become victim of physical

dissorder

a physical condition in which there is a disturbance of normal functioning
disorder
disorders

like curve legs.

On the other hand

, it is true that masters are prone to diseases who keep pets. The hairs of the animal can be the cause of an allergy and so many other diseases like

toxoplamosis

. In

villages

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village

dogs

have an open area but cities are

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was an open area, but cities
was an open area but cities
is an open area but cities
has an open area but cities been
is an open area but cities being
was an open area but cities being

conjusted

overfull as with blood
congested

dogs should not be comfortable in urban areas.

Secondly

, dogs can be the cause of disturbance in cities. There is no

deniying

declare untrue; contradict
denying

that dogs create

nuisence

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a nuisance
nuisance

by barking and other activities as well. People are

extreamly

to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect
extremely

busy in

cities

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the cities

, they work in day and night shifts and dogs might disturb not only the

masters but

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masters, but

also

the neighbours by its

activites

any specific behavior
activities

,

hence

these should not be kept in the inner built city areas.

In conclusion, cities are

conjested

overfull as with blood
congested
contested

, thereby pets like dogs can

have physical disorder

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have a physical disorder

and these dogs can disturb the residents as well. It is kept by city people in the inner built areas.

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