Immigration has a major impact on the society; what are the reasons for immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

Migration is defined as the

process

of moving away from a nation of born to another.

This

process

can be encouraged

by

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several reasons,

such

as natural disasters, looking for a better quality of life, purchase power and others, leading to consequences for both, who are immigrating and who

receives

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the immigrants.

This

trend will be outlined in the paragraphs below.

To begin

with, there

are

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a myriad of circumstances

which

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influence people to leave their homeland.

For instance

, according to the Development Human report, in 2009, carried out by the United Nation Development Program, about 3% of the global population are living outside of their home country. As a matter of fact, most of these individuals moved overseas looking for better conditions of life.

For example

, a minimum wage in Brazil does not have the same purchase power as a minimum wage in Canada, due to the Canadian coin valuable price internationally speaking.

Thus

, it might explain why 99 thousand people had

leaved

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the Brazilian territory in 2017.

Furthermore

, the migration

process

has its outcomes over foreign natives and over immigrants, increasing socioeconomic issues. To

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this

, one notable justification is the great number of immigrants who have left their countries without a plan to restart. Most of them ended up living in underemployment conditions to survive,

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social inequality, and,

as a result

, increasing the local residents

insatisfaction

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, as some companies prefer to hire a foreigner for a

meager

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salary than natives, resulting in

an

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increasing xenophobia suffered by these new residents.

To summarize, indeed, migrating has a major impact

in

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society, having many consequences from the act.

Thus

, the governments should implement

a

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immigration

process

, a current reality in some countries,

such

as Canada, to receive these individuals properly and avoiding some harmful outcomes resulting from

this

action.

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