In many countries,plastic shopping bags are main source of rubbish.Do you agree or diagree?

In many

countires

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, the main type of trash is

plastic

shopping bags. I agree with

this

notion. In

this

essay, I will discuss the reasons

of

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why people

use

plastic

bags.

Although

there are many

organazations

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avocate

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use

their own bags when they are shopping.

However

, there are still many people

u

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se

the

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plastic

bags. The main reason is they do not have a

conciousness

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to aware

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using

plastic

bags. For

this

cause, the government might not promote enough environment protection of

vidio

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or advertisement.

For instance

, if people do not know how

plastic

damage our environment,

then

they do not aware to

use

plastic

bags in their daily life.

Thus

,

g

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overnment should encourage citizens to

use

their own bags

in stead

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instead

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of

plastic

bags.

The

second

main reasons to cause

this

situation is people think to

use

plastic

bags is more convenience, they do not need to remember

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bring their own bags and they do not need to wash their bags. The best example is when people buy fish, they tend to

use

p

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a

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lastic bag.

This

is because they do not need to wash their bags. Compare with using

plastic

bags, they just need to throw it in the rubbish bin when they back home.

This

also

make

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people prefer to

use

plastic

bags.

Moreover

, when they go to

supermaket

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supermarket
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for shopping, they

also

need to bring their own bags every time.

Therefore

, they might feel

ennoying

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annoying

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.

In conclusion,

although

people

use

plastic

bags will harmful to our environment.

However

, they do not

concious

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to aware

use

plastic

bags because

g

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overnment do not promote some information to teach people ecology knowledge.

In addition

, people

also

believe that using their eco bags is

a

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trouble.

Hence

, these cause

the

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plastic

bags

b

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ecome the main kind of rubbish.

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