is one of the most controversial law enforcement action in American democratic society. In some areas of
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,
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are imposed to restrict
outdoor unless accompanied by an adult.
essay will give reasons behind imposing
and give an explanation to justify them.
Due to the
reasons of
,
are imposed. Young
are vulnerable to joining gangs and being involved in
violence in late hours. It is because American
laws are flawed and buying guns
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the streets is easy. Having a
at
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makes
violence easy to commit, in which
lives are at risk.
,
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have the highest per capita
violence in the world in which
are involved. Overall, Imposing
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in times when violent crimes are committed is beneficial to the
of the involved.
Another reason is
, young
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to involve in
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crimes
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after school hours. Consuming illicit substances derails
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of underage kids and leads them to more crime and illegal activities. According to the one study by Harvard University_s medical college suggests that teenager involving
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illegal drug consumption have lower
statistics compare to
controlled group. In short,
is one of the most important
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for growing kids which justifies imposing
late
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.
In conclusion,
essay explained why in some areas of us imposing
is a necessity.
and
reasons
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young
make it essential in a sense. My opinion about
is positive and
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should impose them wisely and improve
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and
of its young citizens.
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