In today_s world, with more technological advancements, people are having
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life span.
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everyone
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in favour of the same, it can
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persons and society at large. In
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I am going to discuss
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and the probable solutions for the problem.
with,
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of us would like to live longer and would love to spent time with their Kith and kin, but at the same time with age one can develop few health hazards. Few ailments are hereditary in nature like diabetes and few are contagious like tuberculosis etc. Both are disastrous for
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ageing body.
to cure or to maintain a
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one has to spend a lot of money on medication, which needs a healthy financial background.
putting the family members and themselves
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the burden of paying high bills.
to
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few diseases like strokes, Parkinson disease makes the patient unable to lead an active life.
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the sufferer a burden in the eyes of their family members a burden both
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and physically.
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the whole society is adversely affected and steps should be taken by the
to tackle
situation. To
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if
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make proper health care
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and old age home for elderly giving financial and physical assistance it could help immensely.
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should
take steps to help people know the advantages of investment and should force the
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people to invest
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20
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of their income. Another possibility to fight
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rising problem could be to hold up with health camps for all ages and promote
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and
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lifestyle.
Without any qualms, it is seen that both individual and
effort are necessary to cope up with the burning problems of ageing.
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