In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

I always thought that

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rapidly changing technology has made human life easy. In upcoming days, the transport medium we use will be fully

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,

thus

the only part we are going to perform is the travel in it as

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. There are many facts that prove, humans intervention in the work have made errors, whereas the

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machines

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outperform

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work without any mistake

this

same applies to driving.

Firstly

the main feature of automated

cars

is they are connected to each

others

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through the Internet because of

this

they are able to

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information

such

as

road

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block

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or

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live traffic conditions. With the help of

this

, the

cars

are programmed for suggesting and selecting the fastest route,

as a

result

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a

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passengers

traveling

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inside are able to reach the destination on time.

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, the

cars

are fully equip

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with many sensors to detect any movement around them

such

as

sudden

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crossing of the animal on the

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such

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the new

genration

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trasport

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machine use breaks urgently for the safety of the animals as well as the passenger inside.

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, driverless busses and trucks will provide

on time

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movement of workers and goods.

However

, these

autonomus

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autonomous

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trucks and buses can be a problem as they are always connected to the Internet. When it comes to

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cyber security we still

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lacks

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, as many hackers can outperform the hacking and a changing the route perhaps, they can program the vehicles in

way

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that can cause detrimental effects on passengers.

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, the main effects will

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a place in the employment as drivers job will no longer

needed

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.

In conclusion, I

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upcoming

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era of

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transport has certainly

benifit

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us.

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to that, considering the factors above I can say that the

automonus

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cars

will

significatly

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improve

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of life.

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,

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advantages
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of having a

computer operated

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vehicle

outweight

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the disadvantages.

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