In no distant time, people will no longer be buying print media as they can access any information via
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at no cost. I strongly agree with
view and will be discussing why within the essay.
, online materials are readily accessible
is because
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one can easily lay hold of them at any moment in time either with mobile data or wifi. The reason is, almost every individual goes about with their
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and can access the internet anytime they wish.
, in the year
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while I was writing my final year project in Ebonyi State University Abakaliki Ebonyi State, I hardly had the opportunity to gather information related to my study from textbooks as our school library closes by 3pm when am still in class
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lectures,
I resorted to using my phone download online materials later in the day at the comfort of my room which made my research even
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easier.
, online materials are easily updated at intervals.
is because a lot of
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are been published online on daily basis and obsolete
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updated.
,
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a publication by
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journal of medicine in February
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reported that the ABC principles of emergency
The singular verb has does not appear to agree with the plural subject principles. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
been changed to
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principle
and I was that helped me a lot in my professional exam that year.
In conclusion, digitalized information will be the order of the day in the nearby future and
essay has discussed why.
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