The
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century has everything but time, finding time for personal
is sometimes so hard for many people that they have to take a personal day just for that. Most people are in
stressful situations as they cannot find a proper balance between a professional and personal
.
essay shall discuss the reasons and solutions for
situations.
There are several reasons as to why people cannot find a proper balance between their personal and professional
.
and foremost is the lack of planning, most people have planned for long term goals, but forget to make a plan with their family over the
weekend. The other cause is the importance, everyone gives their career the utmost significance with the intent of better tomorrow for everyone in the family; meanwhile, in doing so
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precious years with their family. Another reason is the
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competition in the job market, people have to keep on learning new things with the fear of getting replaced anytime; and, many working professionals
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reason have to keep on studying after working hours or weekends to stay updated.
The solution to many of these reasons
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not straightforward. One solution which is most effective is that people should start giving the same importance they give to their career, to their family,
of thinking about how they will make a better future for everyone, thinking about how will they make their today better.
,
of buying
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luxurious items, people should invest the same money to make a passive income. By
way, they can become more financially independent of
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urrent competitive job market, and can surely get more time for their family.
In the modern world, it_s difficult to keep one_s personal
out of
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professional
and most of the times giving importance to any of them solely can create
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difficulty and increases stress. So, one must give both
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