It is said that men are more privileged than women in their work places and in transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

It is a

nevear

not ever; at no time in the past or future
never

ending debate _whether women are deprived or not_. A number of proponents have drawn their arguments towards men who enjoy more opportunities in the

work places

a place where work is done
workplaces

and in the transportation than the female counterparts.

However

, I need to be

accord

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accorded

with the statement as

this

is the problem of male entitlement society.

To begin

, women have been

experienced

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experiencing

a lot of discrimination in their daily lives, and they need to compromise frequently. In

corporate environment

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a corporate environment
the corporate environment

,

for example

, the room temperature

were kept

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was kept

in a way that it is perfectly suitable for male, but the metabolism rate of

woman_s body

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a woman_s body
the woman_s body

, needed to adjust the body temperature, is not equal to the male colleagues. So they need to tolerate an uneven distribution of opportunities in work places than the male but in a competitive profession, which is the result of male dominance.Another type of deprivation

women individuals

Accept comma addition
women, individuals

are facing

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face

in their daily lives is having

car

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a car
the car

. Having

car

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a car

is a must for every working

individuals

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individual

, but an

appaling

causing consternation
appalling

report has shown in the Business Insider that the safety measures were taken to manufacture a car without thinking of women.

Consequently

, if any accident would take place, the women drivers, whose average height

were

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was

less than men_s average, would be more affected than the male drivers.

Therefore

, women are at more risk of having cars.To conclude, it is distinctive that not only men are more privileged in their work places than women but

also

having private cars.

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