living in a country where you have to speak foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. to what extend do you agree or disagree

Immigration is constantly on a rise. It is undeniable that many people migrate to developed countries to improve their standard of living or getting higher education. I support

this

statement that speaking an overseas

language

in a foreign territory creates serious issues in practical life. By analyzing, that people faced difficulty in socializing and getting employment has proven

this

.

Let`s begin by looking at communication problems that arise on moving to a foreign state.

For instance

, many Pakistani students go abroad for having professional degrees to build their

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. But unfortunately unfamiliar with the mother tongue of the outside nation cause serious social matters

such

as they are not able to communicate with other students and convey their message in a proper way leads to

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situation to make friends.

Therefore

, no one present to share problems

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them alone, frustrated and homesick.

Secondly

, it is commonly seen that a number of society members migrate to other countries to explore employment opportunities.

Although

, it is noticeable that people always face trouble in getting

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of work in an overseas country. Take an example of an underdeveloped community that travel to developed states for work to acquire high salaries. But sadly it creates complications for them

such

as

first

they have to learn

language

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to obtain a piece of work.

Furthermore

, they cannot stand for the violation of their rights because they are unable to understand

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and regulations of that country written in their own

language

.

To summarize, unknown

language

is a great barrier

for

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communication and have a negative impact on practical life. It is extremely recommended to take

foreign

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language

course before making a plan to move abroad to improve lifestyle.

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