Immigration is constantly on a rise. It is undeniable that many people migrate to developed countries to improve their standard of living or getting higher education. I support
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in a foreign territory creates serious issues in practical life. By analyzing, that people faced difficulty in socializing and getting employment has proven
Let`s begin by looking at communication problems that arise on moving to a foreign state.
, many Pakistani students go abroad for having professional degrees to build their
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. But unfortunately unfamiliar with the mother tongue of the outside nation cause serious social matters
as they are not able to communicate with other students and convey their message in a proper way leads to
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situation to make friends.
, no one present to share problems
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them alone, frustrated and homesick.
, it is commonly seen that a number of society members migrate to other countries to explore employment opportunities.
, it is noticeable that people always face trouble in getting
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of work in an overseas country. Take an example of an underdeveloped community that travel to developed states for work to acquire high salaries. But sadly it creates complications for them
they have to learn
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to obtain a piece of work.
, they cannot stand for the violation of their rights because they are unable to understand
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and regulations of that country written in their own
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is a great barrier
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communication and have a negative impact on practical life. It is extremely recommended to take
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course before making a plan to move abroad to improve lifestyle.
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