Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effect will this have on society?

There are many stories of ex-

criminals

that they again commit crimes after release from prison. In my opinion,

lack

of funds, unemployment and addiction are the main causes to commit

crime

again by the offenders.

This

essay will discuss its causes and effects on society in the forthcoming paragraphs.

To begin

with, There are many reasons to commit

crime

again

criminals

.

Firstly

, when a

person

releases from jail he has

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lack

of

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money and to fulfil his needs he commits the

crime

. Now he has less fear to go again behind the bars.

Secondly

, unemployment is

also

the main reasons to commit a

crime

. When a

person

released from prison no one is interested to give employment to the

criminals

. So they have

lack

employment and have no sufficient money to eat food.

Moreover

, after

release

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from jail, they do not hesitate to commit

crime

again. So they become a member of drug mafias or goons and do an illegal task.

For instance

, In a survey, It was found that 80% of offenders again commit offences due to unemployment.

Our society does not accept

criminals

. When a criminal will go to find a job after release from behind the bars. Every

person

first

checks a

criminals

record either he commits an offence or not. When a

person

finds a criminal_s record he denied for the job. After

this

, with the label of ,criminal he does not get a better job than he commits a

crime

to fulfil his needs.

To conclude, Most of the offenders commit offences due to

lack

of money, sheer employment and addiction. These effects on society are really bad. A government should watch all the actions of

criminals

after releasing them

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