is playing an important role in every nation’s development process and
is an important aspect of our life for mobility. Some people believe that
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car is the best mean of
while others say that public
should be used for
purpose.
, as far as I am concerned, I firmly agree that public
should be our main
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of
. The advantages and demerits of using public
are discussed in
essay.
The very
advantage of using public
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is that
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reduced the burning of fossil
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. We all know that fuels like petrol and diesel take
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of years to make.
if we do not decrease the usage level of these fuels
in future it will be diminished. So to make sure that it will not happen in future, we need to save these fuels as much as possible. The very
step towards it is the usage of public
. Since
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public
can carry a large number of passengers it reduced the overall fuel consumption.
it helps to reduce
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air and environmental
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.
, more pollution will be generated if we opt to use private
for
. The more personal
on the road, the more pollution
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will generate. So if we use bus or train for roaming
we can fulfil our part to decrease the environmental pollutions.
,
cost is cheaper in the case of public
. Another aspect is the accident risk. In private
, the probability of
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on road has increased dramatically.
but not least, public
increases your social contacts. Your social life will scatter with the use of government
.
Every coin has two sides and
true for the usage of public
as well.
, public buses or trains take more time to travel to
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. It does not take any shortcuts and
runs
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speed.
, with a private car, you can go to any place in a very short time.
, public
is limited. One has to make sure that he/she has the timetable of public buses or trains. If one does not have
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record,
it generates some hurdles for the travellers. There is little privacy on public
and you can’t relax in a crammed public bus or train.
All in all, I would conclude by saying that public
has more advantages than its disadvantages.
, I like to suggest that buses or trains should
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main
types. Private
should be used for urgent needs only.
, public
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should be used. It will save our environment.
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