Many people prefer to use public transportation while others say that personal cars are the best mode of transportation. Excessive use of private cars is considered to be the main reason for the traffic jam in many cities and that’s why the use of public transportation is encouraged. In your opinion what are the pros and cons of using public transport?

Transportation

is playing an important role in every nation’s development process and

this

is an important aspect of our life for mobility. Some people believe that

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car is the best mean of

transportation

while others say that public

transport

service

should be used for

this

purpose.

However

, as far as I am concerned, I firmly agree that public

transport

service

should be our main

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of

transportation

. The advantages and demerits of using public

transportation

are discussed in

this

essay.

The very

first

advantage of using public

transportation

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is that

it

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reduced the burning of fossil

fuel

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. We all know that fuels like petrol and diesel take

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of years to make.

Therefore

if we do not decrease the usage level of these fuels

then

in future it will be diminished. So to make sure that it will not happen in future, we need to save these fuels as much as possible. The very

first

step towards it is the usage of public

transport

service

. Since

a

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public

transportation

can carry a large number of passengers it reduced the overall fuel consumption.

Thus

it helps to reduce

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air and environmental

pollutions

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.

Secondly

, more pollution will be generated if we opt to use private

cars

for

transportation

. The more personal

cars

on the road, the more pollution

it

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will generate. So if we use bus or train for roaming

then

we can fulfil our part to decrease the environmental pollutions.

Further

,

transportation

cost is cheaper in the case of public

transportation

. Another aspect is the accident risk. In private

cars

, the probability of

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on road has increased dramatically.

Last

but not least, public

transportation

increases your social contacts. Your social life will scatter with the use of government

transport

service

.

Every coin has two sides and

that is

true for the usage of public

transportation

as well.

Firstly

, public buses or trains take more time to travel to

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. It does not take any shortcuts and

also

runs

in

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limited

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speed.

On the other hand

, with a private car, you can go to any place in a very short time.

Secondly

, public

transport

service

is limited. One has to make sure that he/she has the timetable of public buses or trains. If one does not have

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record,

then

it generates some hurdles for the travellers. There is little privacy on public

transportation

and you can’t relax in a crammed public bus or train.

All in all, I would conclude by saying that public

transport

service

has more advantages than its disadvantages.

Further

, I like to suggest that buses or trains should

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main

transportation

types. Private

cars

should be used for urgent needs only.

Otherwise

, public

transportations

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should be used. It will save our environment.

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