Many people today find that the cost of attending a university level education is extremely high for students and their family. What are the causes of this situation, and how can government, universities and the students themselves overcome the problem?

Getting high-level education tends to be

prohibitive

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expensive for pupils and their parents. The root

of

this

issues can be stemmed from three areas of social, and the answers to

this

problem

also

can

be. In

this

essay,

number

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of causes and solutions will

discussed

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, respectively, followed by a

reasoned conclusion.

A lack of state

fund

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for institutes can be one of the major contributors

for

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to

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higher tuition

fee

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. If the

government subsidy was not enough, it would lead educational organizations to increase the

payment to provide

necessary

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the necessary

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program in which special

equipments

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equipment
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pieces of equipment

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and facilities required for

training

students

.

For example

, In some engineering major programs,

students

needs

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to conduct

experiment at

special

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facility which costs a fortune for universities. In

case

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the case

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of some

students

, it

might be difficult to get higher education due to lack of budget and family

issue

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issues

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. Most of young

adults tend to be financially dependent on their parents.

However

, if the family had many children,

it would be impossible to provide all

of

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children

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with higher education.

One of

ways

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to solve the reduction of state subsidy can be long-term

installment

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or allowance for

universities. If there were necessity which

lead

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to increase

fee

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,

government

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the government

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could provide a special

allowance for institutes. By doing so,

University

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universities

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could provide courses without increasing the cost

and

also

enhance the opportunity for

students

to take

high-level

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the high-level
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course

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. Another way to solve the

problem

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the problem

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might depend on

students

themselves. There are plenty of examples in which many

students

from developing

country

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countries

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are taking courses at world

raking

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universities without paying

single penny. If they passed the application requirements including examinations like SAT, GRE

and ect, there would be

higher

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chance to get a fund from any kind of

organizations

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in terms of

scholarship.

In summary, the root of funding and financial depend appear to be the main cause. Co-ordinated

approaches from government, educational organizations, and figures might moderate the hardness

of

this

situation.

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