There is no question that the process of the globalisation has changed
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ives of myriads. The popular belief is that
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the traditional features of each
have undergone
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changes owing to modern developments. In my view, these changes are mostly adverse and in
essay
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I_m willing to provide causes of
trend and reasons to support my opinion.
There are certain factors of
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narrowing between nations.
, it is undeniable that, marketing encourages consumers to utilize the same
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products despite
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their location and cultural preferences. A case in point would be the rapid spread of fast food, people influenced by
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eat hamburgers and sandwiches
of their traditional dishes.
, it became popular to travel abroad, where tourists and citizens of a hosting
experience the exchange of customs and traditions.
but not least, nowadays people started to live in nuclear
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of living in communities.
, the older generation can not transfer their customs to the younger one_s.
In turn to demerits of culture
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I can provide the following arguments. Countries which emulate features of others_ are likely to
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their zest and become
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for tourists.
, India is famous for its rich cultural heritage;
, travellers from all other the world are dreaming to explore
. In
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recent years,
,
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ast modern development of the
has influenced
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the flow of visitors as many of them now choose more authentic places.
, the
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when
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forget it_s culture. National holidays and customs unite people of one
as they gathering together to celebrate them. Remembering events which were precursors to
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articular holiday, they rise their sense of patriotism.
In conclusion, it is possible to say that marketing, tourism and nuclear families gave birth to cultures identity. In my opinion,
is a negative trend as the countries seems to
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their uniqueness and patriotism.
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