More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which can not be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree?

Lifestyle has a huge impact on being healthy. The

way

we treat our body will have a lasting effect on our health. I do not agree with going back to the

tradional

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way

of treating illnesses.

However

, I suggest that we have to look for a better

way

of living.

I do not think that going back to the

traditonal

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traditional

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way

of treating diseases will be of help.

On the other hand

, having the right perspective and adding more value

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living healthily is more of a better option.

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reason to consider is having a balanced diet. A study from Oxford University stated that eating red meat products has a significant effect on having cancer cells.

Therefore

, people must look for options like plant-based food in exchange

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their daily meat intake.

Additonally

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, having enough sleep and exercising can improve health. Sleep has a vital role in our daily mind and body functions. As we sleep our organs can recharge and

reviatalize

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revitalize
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while exercising can help boost energy and

enthisuam

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enthusiasm

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. The combination of these three factors can make a significant impact on our well-being.

In conclusion, medical

technogical

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technological

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advancements can help aid ailments but it is

healthy

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lifestyle that will

pevent

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prevent

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sickness.

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way

we live and the course of actions we take has a vital role

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being healthy.

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