are starting to buy cars
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because it_s affordable and it_s necessary. There are indeed various disadvantages of
approach, which let us to
essay, where we will talk about how can we resolve the problem coming with the fact, that more
in wealthier countries buy automobiles.
In the
place, I would like to share the reasons, why more
are investing in
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purchase these days. One of the motives is that
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to buy an acceptable vehicle these days, especially in developing countries, is more affordable than ever.
, an
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person with an ordinary job can save money for a few years and
can be able to afford a nice
model.
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,
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a vehicle is a necessity.
, if a person has to travel 2 hours
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train to get to work,
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buying a
will save the person some time.
, the increasing number of
investing in cars is leading to more environmental pollution. Especially in the big cities like New York or London
can not go anywhere without a
, no matter if it is owned or borrowed, if it is a taxi or a public transport, because of the large distances.
, the air in those cities gets polluted, which affects the health of the whole country_s nation. Not
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, USA remains statistically the most polluted country in the world, because of its major towns and large roads.
In conclusion, I can suggest a conceivable solution namely electric cars.
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automobiles do not pollute the air, that we breathe, and are environmentally friendly. If they get cheaper, more
would be able to afford them and
buy them.
kind of
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implication would improve the quality of life in the different countries.
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