More and more people nowadays are buying fashionable clothes. Does it have a more negative or positive effects? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience.

there is a significant increase in preferring brandy materials among the public .while

this

may have a negative impact there is

also

a positive effect. I believe

such

phenomena leaves an equal impression. in

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I am going to highlight both advantages and disadvantages of

this

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many societies live for their status ,fashioned

cloths

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is

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one

of their

prorioties

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priorities
properties

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. they consider it the most important part of their life when it comes to attending events

becasuse

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they believe in

such

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away

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they get the

audiance

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attention which may lead to

a

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positive outcomes

such

as more

intersts

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interests

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in investing in areas related to them and consquenecely growth of their

forntue

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fortune

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.

furthermore

,

fashioned

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comunity

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community
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will

recruite

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more tourists to its place where strangers will feel safe to visit them sensing that

such

folks are upgraded and aware about outers so no fear to

come

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visit .

in terms of negative

aspectes

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of the stylish

coton

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cotton
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infiltration, traditions and culture will be the front line against it for

number

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of reasons,

firstly

once nation

promots

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fashioned goods, it stumbles over the principle followed for a long time by ancestors which is according to them an

aggrassive

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behaviour toward the nation teachings and culture ,

in addition

, the more using fashioned clothes the more the gap between poor and rich increases,

for example

when student attend school the poor

one

wearing simple traditional

custome

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customer

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while the rich

presentes

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with

new

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different style every other day which

effects

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the performance of the former

one

badly .

in conclusion, despite

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the

positve

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impact of

followling

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fashions there are

also

many drawbacks

for

betterment

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of nations

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there

most

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be a balance while using stylish clothes by limiting it to

soical

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social

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and formal event and using it

interchangebly

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interchangeably

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with

traditional

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