Music has a history, it started from the stone age and still, it plays a vital role in human lifestyle. Around the world, music has been appreciated and being part of
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life, particularly in my country. It has a large influence, attraction and ability to bring people to the ambience at the mood of
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All cultural activities, festival, sports and worships starts by playing music, which can be a proven
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