Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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have

negative

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a negative

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mindset towards international

tourism

. According to them, it has

bad

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a bad

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impact on the

countries

where they travelled to. I do not

hassitate

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to oppose

this

idea because global

tourism

brings many benefits to the

countries

.

Firstly

, the most crucial benefit of international travel is, it brings foreign currency

in

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the

country

. most of the people in tribunal area where foreign people used to travel, depends on tourists only, they get employment during

season

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:

for example

, Public of Kutch in India survive on

tourism

only, During Ranotsav they try to earn as much as possible.

Besides

, Because of the

tourism

the

haritage

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and legacy of the

country

can be highly maintained as so many visitors come

there

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here

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to visit it. From the survey, it has seen that

,

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approximately 15% of the

countries

are depend

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are depending

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on global

tourism

only.

In addition

, just imagine the world without

tourism

, the exchange of culture, food and

life style

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lifestyle

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will only be possible

,

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if

country

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the country
a country

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allows

foreign

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the foreign

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public to visit.

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, the human being of Europe visit any place of India, they always find their food for the health

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consciousness

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;

As a result

, the local people have to bring the food liked by the europian travellers. Global

tourism

does not only beneficial for

public

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the public

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and the

country

,

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But

also

helpful to industries to make their

market wide

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, these days some industries only provide services by considering tourists.

In conclusion, global travelling may have

negative

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a negative

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impact on the

countries

while I strongly believe that

tourism

brings lots of benefits to natives,

country

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the country
a country

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as well as the companies, even we can not imagine the world without

tourism

.

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