Nowadays more people get married to someone of a different culture than they ever did. Discuss both benefits and demerits of these trend.

In recent years,

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number of

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cross-culture

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culture

marriage

is considered to be more common, so many grooms are married to other

culture

brides compared to the past.

This

essay will not only discuss

advantages

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the advantages

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associated with

this

trend but its disadvantage will

also

be highlighted.

Despite the disadvantage below, there are more noticeable except with support to Inter caste

marriage

. one of the

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rewarding features of the subject is that people who get married with

different

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a different

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culture

in order to know about the tradition,

culture

, belief and language.

This

is because They have become

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, more tolerant and giving

neutral

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opinion about other religions rather than biased view.

Moreover

, people have different strength based on their

culture

, race, geographic location and family.

As a result

, she

turn

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off

cross

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cross-culture

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culture

couples are stronger diverse and have diverse capabilities.

On the other hand,

cross

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cross-culture

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culture

marriage

can bring some drawbacks as well. a frequent criticism about

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is that family and relatives

are not accept

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are not accepted

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them. To elaborate, They have

misconception

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a misconception

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about other

culture

And keep the distance from the couple or forced bride to accept

alien

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the alien

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culture

.

In addition

,

Other

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demotivating feature to consider is that some

culture

have

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lost their

religion

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tradition and chance to extinction because of

inter caste

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inter-caste

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marriage

.

In concussion,

although

cross

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cross-culture

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culture

marriage

has numerous benefits, there are some downsides

can

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that can

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not be overlooked.

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