It is often said that modern farming is a key area of scientific research, with broad advantages for all human societies. While I accept that developed agriculture may have its dangers, I believe that the benefits of scientists method outweigh the drawbacks.
The negative implication of modern agriculture
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often discussed in term of one key area, which is
production. Genetically modified crop
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already being grown, and people are most concerned that they may damage whole ecosystems as
become resistant to diseases and natural predators. But perhaps even more worrying is the possibility that
and using pesticides and herbicides could cause cancer, asthma and other respiratory diseases. Another implication of using pesticides is that precipitation can wash and transmit
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to
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or even rivers. When these chemicals come
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underwater can cause water
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toxic and
problem could bring
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threat for all creature that drink water.
A more optimistic prediction, and one that I favour, is that scientists will find ways to mitigate the risks and use genetic technologies and developed farming in a responsible way. From the
production perspective, genetic engineering could be the solution to famine in developing countries, if,
,
can be grown more reliably in harsh conditions.
, the human population is exploding and
means demand for more and more foods so old-fashioned farming ways cannot produce
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of
that meet the eating needs of human.
, scientists can use genetic engineering method to make
that have huge fruit compare with traditional agriculture in equal condition.
, genetically modified plant
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not need
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insecticides and there is no risk of aquifer contamination.
In conclusion, I am convinced that modern farming will have a positive impact on our lives
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and that people_s fears will be unwarranted.
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