Some experts believe that it is outweigh disadvantages better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays,

language

education is one of the most important key indicators of the development of

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generation. Some specialists argue that primary

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is

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effective place to enhance student capability on foreign

language

rather than secondary

school

.

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essay will discuss both, the advantages and disadvantages of

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of view, and illustrates

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each argumentations examples.

Perhaps studying

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language

is extremely hard to

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, particularly for

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early

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.

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on the

school

curriculum,

students

have to learn several subjects

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the same

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,

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as math, science, sociology, history and other modules.

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, they will definitely have

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time

of study and could affect their mental growth because they need sufficient

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with less playing

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intended to become

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person in the future.

Mastering

the

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foreign

language

will definitely

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for improving student capabilities.

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world, despite only

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on

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their main competencies, the foreign

language

will help them to deliver their knowledge to

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.

Therefore

, studying

this

particular

language

must begin as soon as possible in primary schools.

This

is because

students

are in their golden ages of learning where they have a super sponges brain that

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every single knowledge massively.

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, by studying

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early

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, they will have more

time

to explore

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, so that they can

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language

is adding

students

time

load, it is particularly beneficial for moving forward professional capabilities.

Therefore

, I would like to pursue a better curriculum that

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this

competency in

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school

stages.

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