Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is an opinion that high and middle

education

is important to reach success, but

also

there are some views that working after school is better than spending time for

university

and

college

. I think that high

education

is a necessity for some, even more professions, but some persons in our day, who reach success without high

education

make an opinion that it is a reality to be rich without a

diploma

of

university

and

college

.

At

first

, there are some types of job, which does not require high

education

,

such

as a business. In our day, there are some very rich

people

that have achieved success, even they brought a

university

.

For example

, Mark Zuckerberg left out Harvard. And there are have alike businessmen. Looking to them, in our community has formed a view that a

university

diploma

is unnecessary. But not every

second

became a businessman and not everybody has a talent,

such

as have Zuckerberg. At

last

, a

university

or a

college

gives a basic knowledge, the concept and shows a direction. Personally, for me, it was very helpful. I have understood it when I got a job.

Moreover

, there are some professions without which it is impossible to build a career.

For instance

, a doctor. If a human wants to be a doctor and help

people

, he needs to take appropriate knowledge, which gives only

university

or

college

. It is important at least for

people

, who are being treated. So in our

day

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a

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many employers require a

diploma

of

University

and

college

. Because they give

a

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many tips of every specialices. Even to be an engineer or architect, even a law needs to know

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. The

diploma

is not always just a paper.

In conclusion, I would like to remain again that universities and colleges are affected to become a lifestyle of human.

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, which has high

education

, will feel more cultural and intelligent. He will strive to reach more end more. Intelligent

people

are building a big country.

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