Some people think that trips are a waste of
and
, while others think that it is a significant experience in our life. Yes maybe For
The spelling of traveling is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
you need a lot of
and
because now the cost of hotels are expensive, so you should be ready to spend them, but in my
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new journeys will give vital knowledge and improve your worldview.
For the
, visiting another place for a journey could really take
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amount of
,
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if you want to visit another country and to get to know with
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culture, it takes more than 2 weeks and some people think that it is too much and they are not ready to spend that much of their
.
,
The spelling of traveling is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
could be a big waste of
, but in some cases
statement is wrong.
, I have seen a lot of tv shows where people try to spend only 100$ in 2 days, and it shows that it is possible to travel without spending a lot of cash.
, visiting new places gives very big and valuable experiences that could change your mind,
, while
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you will see new places and will expand your horizons of mind and pay attention that
The spelling of traveling is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
is the big source of new ideas. The most important thing that gives
The spelling of traveling is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
is an emotional experience, your brain will reload and you will see the world from a new perspective.
In conclusion, I think that it is better to spend some
and to upgrade yourself,
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agree that
is
but in
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the knowledge and experience that you will get after
process is worth it.
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