Some people belive that money is the best gift for teenagers while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is true that teenagers are always

desire

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desired

to have a gift. Certainly, one group

agree

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agrees

to consider

cash

as a presents for their children, while others

urged

present reasons and arguments
argued

that bank note should not be given to

youngster

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the youngster
a youngster
youngsters

as a gift.

This

essay will discuss both views, and, later, I will put my opinion.
One group

make

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makes
is made
is making
has made

stance against

presenting

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presents

cash

as a token-gift for adolescent related to two main reasons.

To begin

, Teenagers can go astray in early

age

. What mean that they can buy any addiction related drugs, which have a tendency to grow dependency that leads to

further

addiction.

Consequently

, they become

derail

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derailed

from normal life that treated them as a burden for the family.

In addition

, having money in early

age

would develop

emotionless

. More clearly, they will evaluate everything in terms of monetary benefits that might be a reason to arise any contentious issue among family members in

future

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the future

.

Therefore

, banknote should be avoided as encouragement.

However

, on the other side, others argue for providing money as a presents to youngster connected to two logics.

Firstly

, Teenage can do anything whatever they need

by

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of

saving

this

cash

.

For example

, a report published in the daily newspaper in France, showed that one-tenth adolescent went abroad without any concern from their parents. As they have had enough savings, they did not consider their parents for granting any permission.

Secondly

, savings tendency will grow in early

age

.

In other words

, Teen will try to keep some

cash

for future necessity which inherently develop

kid_s immature brain

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the kid_s immature brain

to foster

economical tendency

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an economical tendency

towards money.

Thus

,

cash

can be provided as a

gifts

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gift

.

To conclude, some are always finding reasons to provide banknote as encouragement

to

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for

boys and girls, while others think

coin

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a coin

should be avoided as

gift

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a gift

in immature

age

.

However

, I believe that any type of

cash

is

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has been

always

encouragement

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encouraged

in early stage, but

this

amount should be justified.

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