Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

There is no doubt that the motivation to choose a type of

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is very particular and crucial for a person_s well-being.

Although

some individuals believe that there are more benefits than drawbacks to living in a

house

, others decide to live in an

apartment

. I agree with the former statement and in

this

essay, I will explain why I believe that the benefits to (of) living in a

house

outweigh the drawbacks in comparison with living in an

apartment

.

Firstly

, the negative of living in a

house

compared to living in an

apartment

, (-)is that the former is less affordable than the latter. The reason for

this

is that a

house

has more

space

and area than an

apartment

, (-)so that the cost of living is more expensive. Even when deciding to buy one.

As a result

, some people choose to live in an

apartment

and have less (fewer) expenses. Whereas some who have more financial conditions (financial means or just means), choose to live in a

house

in order to have more comfort.

However

, the main advantage of living in a

house

is that It has more

space

and

privacy

.

This

is because when living in an

apartment

, we have a huge number of neighbours

,

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while living in a

house

we have fewer.

This

is a problem because, as we do not know the intention of everyone, when living in an

apartment

we are more exposed to gossip, as a consequence most of our

privacy

is taken.

On the other hand

, living in a

house

enables us to have less interference from others and more

privacy

,

thus

there is more

space

and green area around to (for) leisure and relaxation in comparison with an

apartment

.

This

is a great choice especially for a family with children.

In conclusion, considering that choosing a place to live is very important, I strongly believe that the advantages of

privacy

,

space

and comfort that comes with living in a

house

outweigh the disadvantages of (the) price compared with living in an

apartment

.

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