Promoting of
inspire people to buy the thing which they do not need really.
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promoting
help us to know about the new
that we might need for better living.I agree on both the point of view.As everything things have
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and
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both.
Advertising
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people attract towards the
,Sometimes it shows more feature
actually they have in that
and encourage them to buy the thing which they do not need in their
to
life. They might use it for the
time, letter on they keep it aside and it just
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wasted or become useless to use.It mostly
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the children eyes for toys. Where parents are bound to buy for them even though it might be
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and worthless to keep their kid happy.
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advertising
gives us
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about the
and show us the usefulness of new
which make easier for us in
to
life.It
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us
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which market is cheaper and where it is expensive. Following that we make
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use of good budget of the
in
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way. Promoting
help the seller to sell their
by using the cheapest means of communication.They are able to reach
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number of potential buyers where sales staff cannot
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.
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growth of information on the Internet has
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the
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of time people spend on it, which has
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generated a new market for Internet advertising. And it have both have advantage and
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. So, we have to utilize our brain and buy the
which will be reasonable and useful for our
to
life.
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