Some people say that arts subjects such as painting or drawing should not be made compulsory for high school students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In

this

modern era, world is changing a lot as compared to the past.

This

is only possible because of the education and

techonologies

the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technologies
technology

. People have a negative thought regarding to the subject, which is related to the arts. I personally believe that every subject has its own importance. In the following paragraphs, I have some strong arguments to support my view.

However

, some people think that painting

is not suppose

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is not supposed

to be

compelsary

required by rule
compulsory

in the school. They are saying

this

thing because they are not aware of the importance of it. Even though every coin has two sides ” one is positive while another is negative” and same

perinclple

applies to the

evey

(used of count nouns) each and all of the members of a group considered singly and without exception
every

suject

the subject matter of a conversation or discussion
subject

. But the positive

effec t

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect

of each course in

student_s life

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a student_s life

is much

more higher

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higher

than the negative result.

For example

, painting is very essential part of the writing and it is scientifically proven that. If children are good

in

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at

drawing

then

they are excellent in writing naturally. Lectures on drawing are improving

human_s thinking capacity

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the human_s thinking capacity

and

visuable

relating to or using sight
visual

image. That_s why every school must involve painting subject.

Moreover

, drawing is more

importent

of great significance or value
important

for those students, who are trying to make their

fucture

the time yet to come
future

as a painter. In 2009, one government report shows that, 75 percentage

enginer

a person who uses scientific knowledge to solve practical problems
engineers
engine

and doctors who are

sucessful

having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful

in their life, they were good in painting at their schooling time. There are

numerious

amounting to a large indefinite number
numerous

advantages of drawing. That_s why

government

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the government

must have

try

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tried

to engage everyone in

this

, by providing free classes on it and organising

competition

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a competition
the competition

on it.

To conclude, drawing is really beneficial for the every student and I

am fully agree

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fully agree
have fully agreed

with it, only because of the excellent outcomes.

This

is good for the society as well as for the country.

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