Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages.together To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In our boring life

,

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,

music

can be give

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can give
can be given

us rejuvenate,

enyoyment

the pleasure felt when having a good time
enjoyment

and pleasure.

Music

is a one kind of road of

communicated

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communicating

as well as connected different community or culture together. In my knowledge based

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,

I cannot agree that

music

is a proper

path

something determined in relation to something that includes it
part

of coming people of

variant

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varying

cultures and ages together. I considered that

music

is

a

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an

amazing

way but

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way, but

it is not magnificent

way

.

Firstly

,

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,

There is no doubt that

melody

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the melody

can be removed our restless

,

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,

but how song can only superior

way

to add people, culture as well.

they

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They

are several of path to together society. For illustrious -qualified behaviour, dynamic personality, honesty and so on can be

tools

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tooled

of

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by
for

add

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adding

people not only

way

music

.

Moreover

,

song

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the song

also

created noise and disturb others. If

i

refers to the speaker or writer
I

love

music

it does not mean that everybody loves

music

.

Secondly

, loud

music

damage our ear

,

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,

as well as

create

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creates

amply environment pollution. Like, sound pollution.

On

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At

the top of that a number of

seriour

concerned with work or important matters rather than play or trivialities
serious

citizens and Islamic mind people

does not pay

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do not pay

momentous

this

types of

way

to get connected

Although

music

maked

produced by a manufacturing process
made
market
makes

lot

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a lot

of

problems but

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problems, but

a specific time

need

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needed

to hear

song

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the song
a song

.

For example

a time when we feel alone, we need a company that time

mucis

an artistic form of auditory communication incorporating instrumental or vocal tones in a structured and continuous manner
music
macs

can do

manything

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many things
many thing

..Most of the foreigners who don_t know that country Language

thay

people in general
they

also

can feel tune. In

appenance

outward or visible aspect of a person or thing
appearance
penance

,

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,

tune is a better

path get to gether

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path to get to gather
path get to gather
path get together

community but

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community, but

it is need how we utilize in it.

In conclusion, I believed that

music

is

a

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an

excellent

way but

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way, but

it is not better for everyone.

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