Some people think employers should not care about the way their employees dress, but the quality of work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that employees absolutely dress what they think is comfortable for them without judgment, but how effective they

work

. In my perspective, I suppose that both of them

also

play a fundamental role

for

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minimum standards at the

work

office.

On the one hand, what they solve

this

problem at

work

and what they do to take benefits for their company which is proved for controllers. When you

work

at some specific occupations, if they want to keep these jobs they will have the ability to receive it and be totally reasonable for it. With fantastic performance which is attributed to the fact that not only they deserve higher profit, but

also

gain highly

respectations

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from their employers or bosses.

For example

, in

Vietnam

airline

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which is one of the biggest airlines in

Vietnam

, at the end of every month, they

also

celebrate people who have some achievements,

however

, they absolutely punish people who make mistakes.

On the other hand

, dressing the uniform in the company creates a professional

environment

. For the most part, the working

environment

is extremely crucial for the effectiveness of

work

. When employees

work

in huge companies, they

also

allow the rule that they have to dress in the same clothes which

leads

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to equality between every

employees

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, which will make employers just focus on their performance with judgement about clothes.

For instance

, in

Vietnam

airline

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, the company_s purpose is

create

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a unification

which

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radically makes a professional

environment

and any persons in

Vietnam

airline

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will become their symbol.

In conclusion,

although

performance at

work

office is sharply important, dressing same uniform will bring some positive aspects

that

is

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relevant with creating

private

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environment

for

company

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