Some people think money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness.

It is frequently considered by many that in order to be happy, money has a vital role to play. In my opinion, people can be happier even if they do not have

enormous amount

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an enormous amount

of money, as there are many aspects of one_s

life

which prompt

happiness

.

First

of all, I believe it is not true that wealth is associated with a person_s

happiness

.

This

is to say, people can live a happy and healthy

life

even if they do not own adequate financial resources.

For instance

,

majority

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the majority
a majority

of people would agree that the residents of developing countries feel much more pleasurable in

life

than those in developed countries, despite earning low wages and living a simpler lifestyle compared to those in developed countries.

Secondly

, human beings can live a prosperous

life

by being involved in

myriad

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a myriad
the myriad

of activities,

such

as volunteering or helping each other to feel the true sense of

happiness

. To illustrate, a doctor working in underprivileged areas can experience an essence of

happiness

, even when not expecting much in return.

Moreover

,

having people we love

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are people we loving
were people we loving
having people we love

around us, has an equally important part to offer in promoting

happiness

. People tend to be happier if they are with their families and friends, not only during the times of

celebrations but

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celebrations, but

also

when they are facing certain circumstances, which makes them feel relaxed and at peace.
In conclusion, money can certainly be of help to many people, it is not linked to a person_s

happiness

, unlike the pleasure of helping someone in need or being surrounded by friends and family.

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