some people think that dangerous sports should be banned , while others think people should be free to chooes disscus both view and give your opinion

Nowadays

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the kinds of

sportes

an active diversion requiring physical exertion and competition
sports
spots
supports

are increased

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one we can find dangerous sports and sage sports

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However it

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However, it

is commonly believed that dangerous sports should be prevented from governments

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whereas others believed that

this

descusion

an extended communication (often interactive) dealing with some particular topic
discussion
decision

up to people and their choices

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In my opinion

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I strongly agree with that each person is

respnsible

worthy of or requiring responsibility or trust; or held accountable
responsible

for his

descusion

the act of making up your mind about something
decision

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In

this

essay I will discuss

this

universial

of worldwide scope or applicability
universal

issue

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Firstly

, there is no doubt that sports are

consiedered

carefully weighed
considered

as a hope and it carries a lot of interesting moments during

practtice

a customary way of operation or behavior
practice
practise
practiced

it, but some people thought that keeping alive is more important than having a fun

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Besides

, governments should prevent

this

kind of sports

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For instance

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according to a survey in

Astralia

a nation occupying the whole of the Australian continent; Aboriginal tribes are thought to have migrated from southeastern Asia 20,000 years ago; first Europeans were British convicts sent there as a penal colony
Australia

most of

climbers

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the climbers

to

Iverest

a mountain in the central Himalayas on the border of Tibet and Nepal; the highest mountain peak in the world (29,028 feet high)
Everest

lose their life during the climbing time

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so

to a very great extent or degree
So

a sport like climbing should not be

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supported, it

should be

preventd

keep from happening or arising; make impossible
prevented
presented

solely

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secondly

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Secondly

, in some countries it is known that when you are 18 years old you will be responsible for and your

dicisions even

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decisions, even
decisions even
decision even

so if it was wrong or dangerous

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because in

this

period of life people are able to realize the good things for them

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Morever

in addition
Moreover

, player sports should take their own decisions and choose their sport

For example

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in The Good Doctor

series there

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series, there

was a patient who fell during his climbing after finishing his cure, all what he want is to climb again and again because is part of his

live

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life
liver

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So it is unfair to tell people what the should do and what they should not

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To conclude

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In my opinion I strongly agree with that we should give a space for sports players

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and I appeal government to afford the

safty

free from danger or the risk of harm
safest
soft

ways and support sport players as much as they can

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