Some people think that in this modern world people are getting dependent on each other, while others think that this world makes them more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In

this

present

world

, many

people

are debating whether or not they are getting more dependent on each other or vice versa.

However

, in my opinion, I think the current

world

we are living in makes us independent from one another because of how

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affects our current state.

Living dependently

from

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each other are currently decreasing due to the innovations and changes in

this

world

. In the past,

people

used to rely

from

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their friends and families in order to sustain their lives because it is hard to do it by themselves. They rarely have the strength and abilities to

fulfill

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them due to

lack

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of resources and money.

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, if students

wants

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to finish college, they solely rely on their parents to be able to graduate.

This

has been a major problem

especially

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from

the

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third

world

countries.

Meanwhile, because of our continuous

evolving

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, numerous

people

are getting more independent. It has become an evident choice because of

the

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number of reasons.

First

is

the

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technology, internet paved the way for researching ideas, solutions and other means to overcome any obstacle that may come.

For instance

, washing machines, microwave ovens and

smart phones

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have been a constant partner towards making lives easier.

Second

, independent skills are adapted and being taught as early as childhood days, and

as a result

, they become more resilient

at

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any circumstances given.

Lastly

, the change

on

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how

people

think, which is more

open minded

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, is how it affected the

world

that it created more possibilities that aid

people

in becoming self-sufficient.

This

sense of individualism

are

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rather more accepted and seen as a positive change for everybody_s sake which makes it inevitable.

In conclusion, becoming a self-sustained individual will continue to take place and becoming so, will create a lasting positive outcome for everyone.

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