Some people think that intelligence is innate while others think that we can improve our intelligence through learning. Discuss both sides and give you opionion.

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of individuals believe that IQ level is an inborn quality while others opine that it could be improved by learning.I personally agree with the latter statement as

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of people are born with

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with, medical science is

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of exceptions we often view that there are certain people who have

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related to memory .They can perform calculations within fractions of seconds that may not be possible for a normal person .

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, famous scientist John

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had exceptional features related to physics he always viewed different

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in the lab with curiosity so he has a role in the various inventions in

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, in today_s modern world there is a colossal upsurge in the level of

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intelligence by regular learning thanks to the ubiquity

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technology ,modernisation and globalisation which has made education quite easy.For

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of awareness for education and implementation of proper rules and

regulation

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has uplifted the living standard of people living in low slum areas.

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of

high quality

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software_s has enhanced

mental

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capabilities of the younger population.

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, both public and private organisations should come forward for

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implementation of skills related to reading.

In a nutshell, in my

opinion

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though

intelligence

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is innate

but

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a lot could be done by providing adequate facilities in the field of learning.

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