Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Technology today have offered

wast variety

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a vast variety
vast variety
worst variety
what variety

of communication methods. People can

globaly

throughout the world
globally

connect from anywhere around the globe.

Therefore

the opportunity to become

social

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more social

in today_s lives is easy.
Since with the advance

technology there

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technology, there

are

plethora

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a plethora

of windows and mobile applications

such

as

facebook

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Facebook

,

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,

instagram

,

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,

skpe

bypass
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scope

,

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,

twitter etc. . By having these social media platforms we can get connected to our friends and family.

However there

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However, there

are many

drawback

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drawbacks

toward

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to

it

also

. Because the technology is more developed

virtualy

in essence or effect but not in fact
virtually

most into our mobile phones

,

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,

laptops etc.

Hence these

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Hence, these

are virtual method to become social.

Therefore it_s

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Therefore, it_s

not

lot

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a lot

more

of

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about

actual ways of connecting. Since todays social

medias

a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media

have made a competition

amoung

in the middle of
among

everybody it is less like to be

socialize

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socialized

on these platforms.
Connecting our friends and family the old fashioned way gives us the sense of real feeling. Since the action and reality

makes

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make

huge difference

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a huge difference

comparing for virtual communication. Since people now a days more distracted

with

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by

their phones

their

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they_re

less likely to be

social

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socially

even if there is to associate.

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