Some people think that money is the best gift to give youngsters, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays

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in

this

new era the humankind

think

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thinks

that

cash

are the best present in young people

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while the other told that it is not good.In

this

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i

refers to the speaker or writer
I

would discuss the views

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and some of my opinion that the foremost offering

gift

of the

childrens

a young person of either sex
children

the

money

are not important.

so

to a very great extent or degree
So

that the youngsters they know the value of the good moral and they know love and affection are the most important largess.

To commence with

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to show a

presentation

of the young

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currency is not

neccesary

absolutely essential
necessary
unnecessary

because they have so many

option

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options

to give a present to their children.For an instance, the barbie doll is the best largess for the girl

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and the robot toys are for the boys in

this

gift

the youngsters are extremely happy.

However

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money

is the best

presentation

if the offspring

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are

need

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needed

to pay

in

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with

their

tuation

a fee paid for instruction (especially for higher education)
tuition

pays in school.

This

kind of present it is allowed to the children.

A part

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Apart

from

this

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to give a

money

present of the young people are better

also

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so that the youngsters how to know the value of the

cash

.But the

parents they

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parents, they

need a guidance to their offspring.

This

modern day the youngsters they know the trends of the society.

because

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Because

of

this

new technology they

are follow

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are following
follow
are followed
have followed

the trend of their famous artist.

For example

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most of the time many young people are addicted of the styles of Korean artist.

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other

countries

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country_s

youngsters are copying the latest trend of

this people

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these people
this person

. In result

this

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the young people they do not like to receive a material presents.

In conclusion

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the young people now are

need

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needing
needed

the guidance of the family

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so that they know the love and affection are the most

presentation

than the

cash

.In my opinion

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children should know the past generation that the

cash

are not a

gift

, if the parents give a largess to their offspring it is a high value.Young people now are essential to know the

money

it is not important as a

gift

but the love

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care and affection of parents are the most

presentation

.

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