Some people think that the government should spend more money on public services rather than wasting money on the arts. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

there is no doubt

money

plays a crucial part in our life .while some people argue that administration should invest more in social services

instead

of on skills .

however

, I contradict the statement

that is

the

government

no need to spend capital on the arts .I will discuss in subsequent paragraphs

To begin

with , the authority has to spend funds on skills

such

as music ,dance and painting etc because those people who have poverty in their lives ,

therefore

, they can not able to show their latent and confidence have been losing by them .

As a result

,there are many ways to investing

money

such

as,free conditions that can be organised by the

government

. in

this

,way everyone can take part in

this

without any interruption .

Furthermore

, many individuals get pleasure in going to see music and theatre performances so it is important that can continue to provide entertainment to the public

Nevertheless

,

this

does not mean that the social services neglected and

thus

, there are several reasons for spending the amount of the

government

budget on it .

first

and foremost ,social services are things

such

as a hospital.roads and school and these things determined the quality of life most of us will have .

for example

if the

government

does not spend cash on hospitals ,the health of our society may decline .

similarly

,if not enough

money

is spent on schools,our children may not be properly educated .

Also

,it will be the poor in our society that will affect more if do not spend

money

on these things

In the conclusion , the

government

should invest an amount of

money

in both either social service or artcraft and so

i

Change the capitalization
I

The pronoun I should always be capitalized.

show examples

think spendings on

money

is not a waste .

this

will help individuals a lot.

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