Some schools have restricted the ude o f mobile phones. Is this a positve development or a negative development. Give reasons for your answer and include any example fro your own knowledge or experience.

State-of-the-art technology has made it possible to have diverse

use

for mobile phones. Gone were the days when phones were used for only calls but not now, as it can

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use

to browse the net, watch movies and make video calls. Some educational institutions have decided to put a hold on the

use

of cellphones by the students. I consider

this

development to be a good one because it

reduce

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distractions in class,

prevent

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the students from watching what needs not to be watched and have

time

for themselves.

The

first

reason why cell restriction in school is great is its ability to eradicate distractions during lectures. Most people can not leave their

phone

for some minutes without pressing it. They are addicted to it. So when

such

a person is with his

phone

, it becomes difficult to focus on any other thing apart from his handset.

For example

, most of my classmates used to play with their mobe whiles the teacher is

infront

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teaching.

Hence

, preventing students to

use

their cellular helps them to concentrate in class. The

second

reason is that

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this

gesture prevent them from watching what is not good for them. In recent times, you can have access to any video on the internet and because the

phone

can be used to browse the net, most of the te teens abuse it and

use

it for unnecessary things.

For instance

, a teenage boy will always

use

his cell to watch porn movies which

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considered immoral in the community. So putting a band on cellulars in colleges helps to deter the educatees from viewing unscrupulous videos.

Lastly

,

time

management is a key reason for cell restriction. Majority of the global population now spends more than half of their

time

on their

phone

.

This

wasted resource can be channelled into something useful.

For example

, I used to spend more than five hours a day on my

phone

playing games alone,not to talk about the minutes I spent chatting with friends and watching movies on it. But when I stopped

this

because I had to study for my IELTS, I realised I had more

time

to myself than I expected. So in my opinion, pupils who are not allowed to

use

their cells will have more

time

to learn.

In conclusion, a number of educational facilities have put

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banned on the

use

of cellphones.

This

is a positive development because it

metigated

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how the youth uses the

phone

to view what they are not supposed to, concentrate fully in class and manage their

time

very well.

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