The table describes the information about the
of tourists and expenditure in the UK over the seven
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from 2003 to 2008.
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of
spend and average spend per
these were increased from the starting, whereas, average nights per
were reduced from the starting.
According to the graph illustrates, in 2003,tourists numbers were 24,715, after three
later,
was raised gradually, with an average of 32,778, but in 2008,
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of
had reduced slightly,
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31.88.
, spending money in 2003,
was represented 11,855,
was increased in each year gradually and end of the year reached at 16,323 pounds.
In terms of average spend per visit in the starting period,
figure was accounted for 475, after the
year,
proportion was diminished slightly by9.
, in 2005, there was a gradual rise from 2005 to 2008 from 471 to 511.
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average nights per
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, in 2003 and 2004, these both
had the same amount, which is 8.2, but 2005 to 2006,
ratio was increased from 8.3 to 8.4.
,
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to 2008,
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both
had the same
of average nights per visit, which is 7.7.
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