The average standard of people_s health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience..

Nowadays

people

becoming more unhealthy become of their lifestyles. A lot of researchers find out that

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becoming a

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to how long will

people

live longer in the future. I totally agree with

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and

this

essay will discuss the reasons why

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becoming a

threath

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to humans life.

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, lifestyle has a great influence on peoples health.

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of it is

Sedentary

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lifetyle

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, lying and doing nothing for the whole day can cause harmful

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and our body will start to

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.

Second

, bad eating habits a lot of

people

loves to eat

junkfoods

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and

fastfood

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. Eating

this

kind of food is not healthy because

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cannot provide

proper

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nutrients that our body needed.

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social media is one of the

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people

tend to be lazy because of the influence of social media. Like I wanted to exercise but I want to stay at

home

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whole

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day and browse my phone.

In conclusion, I totally agree

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