The government is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets. Some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problem of public. To what extent do you agree?

Some

people

consider that the

government

should use

its

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it_s
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budget

tackle

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to tackle

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human~ s

problems

rather than spending income on exploring

earth

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the earth

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on other planets. The belief that solution of

people

s problem is the crucial factor, a

thought provoking

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one and one that I believe in.

On the one

hand

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it is understandable why some

people

think

government

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the government

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has to focus on spending fund for human s

problems

.

Government

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The government

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needs to promote Earth

planet

and our

planet

consist of human species.

Government

should regulate inner issues and encourage

people

for being in life.

Consequently

, unless they solve environmental and economic

problems

,

people

will witness

miserable

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a miserable

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life style

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lifestyle

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.

For example

,

as a result

of air or water pollution

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,

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people

face

with

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health

problems

. If the

government

did not intend to manage its responsibilities, it would not inherit health generation.

On the other hand

, I am of the opinion that

government

officials should not only be engaged with public questions, but

also

might tend to demonstrate

their

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competent

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in discovering

new

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a new
the new

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world.

Firstly

, it is the way for improving

cutting

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the cutting

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edge technology field.

Secondly

, discovering new life eliminates

overloading

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the overloading

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of our

planet

.

For example

, half of

population

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the population

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can be moved onto

new

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a new

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planet

by prevention of overpopulation on the Earth.

Finally

, the officials can be awarded

by

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apply

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finance support for implementing

this

project.

To conclude, while I admit that

government

should take care of population

problems

, I do not believe that they should only deal with

society

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problem as there are other factors.

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