The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialise. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statements ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Technology is one of the most powerful tools which humans

has

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have

at their disposal. Very often peoples feel isolated due to the limited physical interactions with others.

Although

there are many advantages of the internet,

however I

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however, I

agree that it discourages us for

socialtion

a formal organization of people or groups of people
association

and physical interactions.

This

would be confirmed

with

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by

how

socialtion

a formal organization of people or groups of people
association

in the society has decreased over the

last

20 years and how children used to play and communicate with each other before as compared to now.

Firstly

, 20 years back, people were more physically active and used to meet each other

alot

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a lot

and played many physical sports together,

however

nowadays these trends has decreased significantly. As per the article published by Khaleej Times in 2018, it stated that as per the

records

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record

before year 2000, at least 50% of the peoples were

regulary

in a regular manner
regularly

involved in at least one of the sports and

this

has decreased to about 10% in the year 2018.

This

fact confirms that peoples_ group activities has decreased due to the technological developments.

This

information hints

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information, hints

us that technology has

seprated

being or feeling set or kept apart from others
separated

peoples

physcially

in accord with physical laws
physically

.

Furthermore

, previously children used to

physcially

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physical
physically
visually

play and enjoy with each

other but

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other, but

it has changed during the time.

For example

: My nephew, he is only 7 years old,

in

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at

this

age he

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age, he

should be playing with friends in the garden, but

instead

he is playing games or watching cartoons throughout the day on the mobile or tablet.

This

action would result him being an isolated from the society.

Likewise many

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Likewise, many

other children are following the same trend and as

such

our future generation would be more or less isolated with each other.

Although

technology helps us to connect with each other but through the change in the social trend over the past 20 years and changing habits of the kids confirms the fact that technology has

also

reduced our physical interactions.

Hence I

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Hence, I

agree that internet discourages people to socialise and

seprates

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separates_
separates
separate

us

physcially

in accord with physical laws
physically

.

Goverments

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Governments

should

intiate

increase the likelihood of
invite

few programs to improve the social activities in our society.

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