The internet has transformed lives and economies bit it is turning the world into a global village. Soon everybody will think and behave in the same way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Advent and invigoration of the internet

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affected significantly

on

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changes

of

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lifestyles, economical developments and many others. Now that

people

have communication

accesses

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at

anytime

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and anywhere, it is universal to experience

same

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the same

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trends

and

cultures

throughout the

world

.

However

, there are concerns regarding what if the whole

world

ends up sharing a single

culture

. In my opinion,

although

people

will enjoy and follow the same

culture

, it is less likely to happen each and every person will think and act the same.

It is undeniable that there are

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boundaries between

countries

owing to the fact that the internet has given

people

the capacity of interacting

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sides of the

world

and

share

their

cultures

.

Consequently

,

people

can listen to the same music, wear the same style

clothes

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,

furthermore

celebrate and sorrow at the same events.

That is

to say,

people

share

the same

culture

,

however

,

that is

the

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new

culture

that

golbally

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globally
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shared, and it has nothing to do with mitigating

ethinic

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cultures

of each

countries

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.

For example

,

people

enjoy international food

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to time, but that does not mean that

people

stop eating their own food.

Besides

it is true to some extent that

people

think and behave

similarly

,

however

,

that is

absolute excessive

generazation

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. In fact, there are many

people

, perhaps more than the number of

people

who

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other

culture

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and follow the

world

trends

, who lives in their home country and

culture

for their lifetimes. Particularly, for non-English speaking

countries

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they have

less

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opportunities to experience other

culture

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as much as English speaking

countires

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do.

Therefore

, it is too soon to say that the whole

world

will have one

culture

.

In conclusion, it seems plausible to worry about losing

distictive

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cultures

of each

countries

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and

share

the same

trends

all over the

world

as it is already happening in some international cities or who are interested in global

trends

. Yet there might be one same

culture

that the

world

share

together, there still be traditional

cultures

remain to every

countries

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